{"id":2578,"date":"2021-07-30T05:00:28","date_gmt":"2021-07-30T05:00:28","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/williamgallagher.com\/selfdistract\/?p=2578"},"modified":"2021-07-30T06:56:53","modified_gmt":"2021-07-30T06:56:53","slug":"no-answer","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/williamgallagher.com\/selfdistract\/2021\/07\/30\/no-answer\/","title":{"rendered":"No answer"},"content":{"rendered":"

There must be something awkward about me because last time I fair raged at you <\/a>about how writers shouldn’t ever ask questions in articles and now I want to at least enthuse about not writing answers.<\/p>\n

It’s a different rant. Questions in articles and features tell me the writer couldn’t do their job whereas answers in a script tell me the writer isn’t great at dialogue.<\/p>\n

This is very specifically something I feel about scriptwriting, but I feel it so strongly that I apply it in fiction, I apply it anywhere I remotely can. And it’s this: I will eat glass before I allow any of my characters to answer a question.<\/p>\n

Respond, yes. React, absolutely. But actually answer what they been asked, as close to never as humanly possible.<\/p>\n

Here’s an exchange of dialogue from a script. I need you to play the first part, I’ll play the second.<\/p>\n

FIRST PERSON: What were you doing in Tesco this morning?
\nSECOND PERSON: Um, buying bacon.<\/p>\n

You read that very well, thank you. I need you to do it once more, maybe with just a tiny bit more anger.<\/p>\n

FIRST PERSON: What were you doing in Tesco this morning?
\nSECOND PERSON: Were you following me?<\/p>\n

You see the difference immediately. The initial exchange about bacon was domestic at best, flat at worst. In the second one, these two characters feel like they’re on their feet, that there is some life and verve and history here, that they’re going to fight.<\/p>\n

I grant you, we’ve lost the information that I was buying bacon. It’s possible that bacon plays an important part in the story, but you suspect not. So what the bacon line really accomplishes is confirmation that I was in Tesco. We already knew that from the question, so that answer was in all possible ways worthless. It was a dead line of dialogue. Dead and therefore deadening.<\/p>\n

When you see an answer like that in a script, it is alway deadening, and it always means the writer is trying to write naturalistically. In a real conversation, it’s more likely that I’d say bacon than I would get in your face about it all, but this isn’t a real conversation. Drama does not have natural, real-life dialogue, it has dialogue that sounds as if it’s natural.<\/p>\n

That’s a gigantic difference and it’s how dialogue carries infinitely more than the information in the words. You delivered your line about why I was in Tesco with some gusto there, but I could’ve asked about your following me in a light, jokey way. I didn’t, though, and you knew I didn’t, even without my writing it like this:<\/p>\n

SECOND PERSON: (Angrily) Were you following me?<\/p>\n

Last week I said that to me, a question in an article is a brick wall that stops me reading on unless I have to. An answer in a script can be a stumble, to my mind, and it breaks the flow, it takes me a little out of the story, because an answer is usually a bit of dead air.<\/p>\n

If I feel strongly about this, though, it’s not that I’m against writers having their characters answer. It’s that doing so without being this dead pause, without reminding me that this isn’t naturalistic dialogue, is beyond me.<\/p>\n

Whereas the reason I’m a writer at all is a show called Lou Grant which basically had an ensemble of journalist characters constantly asking each other things, and then spending half the episode interviewing people. Back when I was a teenager, I watched five years of that show without once realising that it was all question and answer, it is done that well.<\/p>\n

It’s not very often that something you used to adore stands up a couple of decades later, but in this case I now admire that show even more. I just don’t seem to have learned from it how to ask questions without answers being rubbish.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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